Inevitable 13: Pain like icicles on the trees

[mhalachai]

It's posted. The aftermath. Inevitable 13: Pain like icicles on the trees. And yes, it's still Thursday where I am.

OR, if TTH is acting all wonky, at Pomme De Sang

Let me know what you think. Candlelight and Mind the Gap are next in line.

Comments

[sabriel-0405.livejournal.com]

I liked this one better than 12, which was cruelly excellent. I thought this had some great emotion. I think Harry, when he has a chance to think about it, will realize that he came through this stronger than when he started. That while he isn't quite Bellatrix's equal yet, he's well on his way. Training will only make him better and if he is a werewolf, it will only add a dimension that the Death Eaters weren't prepared for. Well done. And thanks!

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

Chapter 12 was just action, this was the reaction chapter. And with everything that's going on, Harry's emotions are crazy. After all, being a teenage boy is hard enough without having crazy people trying to kill you.