Switchback Five: Cobra Commander

[mhalachai]

Switchback five: Cobra Commander is up.

At Pomme de Sang
At TTH

It's a short chapter, but I needed to break from the action before the next chapter. And if anyone screams Anita Sue with the fix, I'll just point you to Obsidian Butterfly and Narcissus in Chains. Thank you.

Comments

[cissasghost.livejournal.com]

Neato chapter - I only vaguely remember how it went in canon, and I'm so tired at the moment I'm pretty close to brain dead, but the thing with the horse was neat. Gory, but neat. I wonder how all these little changes will alter how things turn out between her and Richard, who she only just "met", first impressions being so important.

-Sonya

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

I was worried the horse thing might be seen as a bit of a power surge, then I remembered books 1 through 12. I gave it a chance :P

You picked up on an important point. In canon, Anita used her gun to take out the snake's mouth. Now, using her magic? A whole different thing.

Thanks :)

[cissasghost.livejournal.com]

and then I remembered books 1 through 12 ::snerk::

Are you, by any chance, online now? ::blinks innocently::

-Sonya