FIC UPDATE: Inevitable 23:

[mhalachai]

Inevitable 23: The Parts Of Me I Cannot Hide is posted.

At TTH
(and if TTH is broken:)
At Pomme de Sang
At Skyehawke

As usual, I crave feedback, so let me know what you think. This is a character-building piece, and I like how Micah's developing.

Comments

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

I'm never sure how old Micah is... is he older than Anita? Younger? I figure that because of Chimera, he has had to act older than his years. Yeah, that's it.

As for Nathaniel, it's only taken her how many years to understand that Nathaniel really does need someone in his life to be in control? That's really the one thing I wanted to shake Anita about in the books. Grr.

So I write it the way I like :P

[penyn-1600.livejournal.com]

*grins* I think Micah might be about Anita's age. She's actually kind of young anyway; she's not even in her thirties yet.
Yeah, I agree about wanting to shake her in concern of Nathaniel. He needs someone to be in control of his life and Anita loves to be in control. She should just embrace him the way he is.
I like how you write it! *waves*

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

It's funny how Anita loves to be in control, but with the one person who wants her to run his life, she can't handle it. The girl's got issues :)

[penyn-1600.livejournal.com]

She definitely does. :)