Inevitable 11: Lies, Damned Lies and Ultimatums

[mhalachai]

Inevitable 11: Lies, Damned Lies and Ultimatums is posted! Go me. Enjoy, comment as you wish, and generally have a good time. I think the next chapter should be out in the next couple of weeks. I should note that this is the chapter that gave me the most trouble.

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After a brief re-read of the HP books, I came to the conclusion that Harry, for all his goofing off around Ron and Hermione, acts respectfully to adults that he respects (Not Snape, that's for sure.) Since he doens't know Damian yet, I put him in that camp.

Thanks about the first section of text. I had to bash my head against a wall for a bit, but I think it worked. Plus I got a few good comments in there that I'll be using as foreshadowing for the next chapter :)