Inevitable 11: Lies, Damned Lies and Ultimatums

[mhalachai]

Inevitable 11: Lies, Damned Lies and Ultimatums is posted! Go me. Enjoy, comment as you wish, and generally have a good time. I think the next chapter should be out in the next couple of weeks. I should note that this is the chapter that gave me the most trouble.

Love love.

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[houses7177.livejournal.com]

[howl] TtH is down! I can't get in to read! My eyes my eyes!

ETA: Okay, it loaded now. I can go read. My brain is no longer melting from my ears.

Loved Damian and Harry's interaction at the end. It was so...formally poignant. The 'sir's and cautious offerings of family connection were beautifully done, and had me tearing up something terrible. Harry also handled the situation with the Lamia well- or I should say you did. His casual use of magic so radically different than that of his new companions was perfectly placed. I also quite liked Anita and Richard's civility. You've written them as they should be- prickly and difficult, but united and trying their best. Very nicely done.

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[mhalachai.livejournal.com]

His casual use of magic so radically different than that of his new companions was perfectly placed.

Thanks. I'm going to address this further in the next chapter, a bit of magic and its uses and such.

I also quite liked Anita and Richard's civility
I think this is where LKH is headed, them being able to basically lead the pack but fundamentally unable to live together. They're trying, which is what Richard started doing in ID, I feel.

Thanks!