Inevitable 14
Apr. 24th, 2005 09:59 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
mhalachaiInevitable 14: That is not dashed with pain and weariness and fault; I crave the stain is up, posted and ready for your eager eyes.
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Please,I crave your feedback let me know what you think.
I'm starting to understand why we never see a lot of the supporting characters in LKH's fics. I've got... *counts* 16 characters on screen at one point in this monstrosity. It's unpleasant. You end up having people stay silent a lot, which seldom happens in real life. Gah.
Other thoughts... I'm not sure what to do with Micah. I've got this thing that I'll probably never explore in fic, that of all the people in Anita's life, Richard is the one that will make Micah jealous. Everyone else... Nathaniel's a sub, Damian's Anita's property, JC's the Master, and Asher belong to JC. Micah can deal with them all, but Richard's a new category. He's an alpha male, who has demonstrated himself hard-put to share Anita's affections. It is in this mindset that I write In.14.
Those who are wondering about Anita's mental state.... all I can say it, keep wondering.
At TTH
At Pomme de Sang
At Skyehawke
Please,
I'm starting to understand why we never see a lot of the supporting characters in LKH's fics. I've got... *counts* 16 characters on screen at one point in this monstrosity. It's unpleasant. You end up having people stay silent a lot, which seldom happens in real life. Gah.
Other thoughts... I'm not sure what to do with Micah. I've got this thing that I'll probably never explore in fic, that of all the people in Anita's life, Richard is the one that will make Micah jealous. Everyone else... Nathaniel's a sub, Damian's Anita's property, JC's the Master, and Asher belong to JC. Micah can deal with them all, but Richard's a new category. He's an alpha male, who has demonstrated himself hard-put to share Anita's affections. It is in this mindset that I write In.14.
Those who are wondering about Anita's mental state.... all I can say it, keep wondering.
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Re: so grand . . .
Date: 2005-04-26 03:15 pm (UTC)I'm always kind of worried about it... never sure if my Harry's veering off to the left. Glad to see the characters read true.
I wonder if Richard would blame himself since he helped keep Harry there for his own reasons.
You mean a patented Zeeman guilt trip(tm)? Hella ya.
But it's interesting seeing the characters act that way around Harry now.
He's not just another kid with tall tales anymore. He's a real danger, a real threat, and they know it now.