FIC: Inevitable 19

[mhalachai]

New Inevitable chapter! Nineteen: Alone In The Storm

At TTH
(and if TTH is broken:)
At Pomme de Sang
At Skyehawke

As always, any comments and questions are welcome. The next chapter should be along any day.

Comments

[emeraldswan.livejournal.com]

I don't think so; most people understand that those things just happen. Though, if it's possible, you could always write two versions, the PG13 and the NC17, though I *always* have trouble doing that.

[emeraldswan.livejournal.com]

Oh, and I understand about the gym thing. Believe me. Right there with you.

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

I'm still not sure if it's essential to the story. The hardcore bits, I mean. I *could* cut it before we descend into rampant sex and then dart to the post-coital conversation. That would save the rating.

I'm trying to keep the extraneous writing to a minimum. All the story so far... okay, 99%, is essential to the plot. Three pages of Anita and JC having sex might not be completely necessary :P

[goddessvicky.livejournal.com]

Echo does what you're suggesting. She'll cut cut it out and put it in another post under it's own title. Like, Inevitable Interludes or something. That way if people want to read it, they can. I mean, if it's part of the story to you, you should write it. This way, you don't have to worry about the rating.

And this was an amazing chapter. I'm interested tolearn why the Aurors would be there, and especially what's up with Anita at the end. Very intriguing.