FIC: Inevitable 19

[mhalachai]

New Inevitable chapter! Nineteen: Alone In The Storm

At TTH
(and if TTH is broken:)
At Pomme de Sang
At Skyehawke

As always, any comments and questions are welcome. The next chapter should be along any day.

Comments

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Over the last few chapters I want to alternatively hug and hit Anita - which I tend to want to do when I'm reading the books, so Bravo! :)

Then you're just going to love what I do in the next two chapters :)

I do hope she bucks up a bit soon and/or stops being strong before she kills herself or someone else. So like her to reject comfort becuase of guilt.

.... oh, something will happen soon. Hopefully before she kills someone.

I want to take Nathaniel and wrap him up in cotton wool until Anita can see beyond the end of her nose, and Micah so isn't helping.

I'll be going into this in a few chapters, but Micah's actions and reactions are not isolated or developing because he's a bit of a dick. Also keep in mind that Anita's irrationality isn't necessarily coming across as crazyness.

Richard is wonderfully Richard in his arsiness and it looks like there's going to be punch up sooner or later

let's just say that Richard's going to be kicked into gear soon.

Poor Harry is being far too Gryffindor and taking it all on himself and he really needs a friend right now. I hope he and Nathaniel can help each other through the trauma that's going on - their talk seemed a bonding method for both of them.

Nathaniel is really getting the brunt of all this. Anita thinks that she needs to drive him away to save him, but all she's sucueeding in doing is digging the knife a little deeper in him. I'm writing a scene now where we finally reach Nate's breaking point. It's not pretty.

Loved the whole lupanar scene, and the whole Bellatrix bit was fabulous. Harry's reaction was beautifully written as well. I like the fact that Jean-Claude is changing his opinon of Harry because of it.

Thanks :) JC orignally thought that Harry was just another modern teenager, but now he's seeing that Harry's not really a kid at all, and by actually sticking around and trying to clean up his messes, Harry's proving himself to JC.

Oh man, I need to get back to work :)